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Mystic Rose Rose's Contest: This Is What I Call A Loyal Love 23 Mar 25
Stars, fiddling serenades of robins’ tweet, Absorb tired thoughts to drift like a song As dulcet air from of window weaves a hum Blending with the melody of celestial sparks. Then, like an open flight,her heart inclines To slide on hours cuddled by gasps of ardor--- While his love-light whispers” Hush, my dear Sleep tight as lashes drop; Dream with me, Play our song to the tune of warm chorus.” And the world passes by in a quiet tunnel, Where morn holds starlight's devoted keep.

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Date: 3/30/2025 5:46:00 AM
Such lovely lines romantically woven. Lines that touch ... CayCay
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Date: 3/25/2025 1:21:00 PM
Nette, you take kindness and love and elevate it to celestial proportions. Reading your work is fun. You do something a bit different from the rest of us and expose us to some word and imaginative pleasure. Many thanks and smiles for that!!
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Date: 3/24/2025 10:15:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Loyal And Devoted Love" write. "Good Luck" Have a blessed spring day writing away.........
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Date: 3/24/2025 6:54:00 AM
It reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Very passionate and descriptive. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K
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