Nette Onclaud Poet Romanticism

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Mystic Rose Rose's Contest: This Is What I Call A Loyal Love 23 Mar 25

Loyal And Devoted Love

Stars, fiddling serenades of robins’ tweet,
Absorb tired thoughts to drift like a song 
As dulcet air from  of window weaves a hum
Blending with the melody of celestial sparks.

Then, like an open flight,her  heart inclines
To slide on hours cuddled by gasps of ardor---
While his love-light whispers” Hush, my dear
Sleep tight as lashes drop;  Dream with me,

Play our song to the tune of warm chorus.”
And the world passes by in a quiet tunnel,
Where morn holds starlight's devoted keep.

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Lyric Man May 17, 2025 at 5:03 AM Nette.. you’ve painted us joy. This work emotes “feels” like a delicate and soulful instrumental love song. The flow itself speaks in a loving whisper to the soul. Love quiets the heart so that nature’s approval can be heard. Your brush strokes are a tender embrace, softly held through the night, and morning wakes to eternal love. Perfection!

CayCay Godwin March 30, 2025 at 5:46 AM Such lovely lines romantically woven. Lines that touch ... CayCay

Duke Beaufort March 25, 2025 at 1:21 PM Nette, you take kindness and love and elevate it to celestial proportions. Reading your work is fun. You do something a bit different from the rest of us and expose us to some word and imaginative pleasure. Many thanks and smiles for that!!

Paula Goldsmith March 24, 2025 at 10:15 AM I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Loyal And Devoted Love" write. "Good Luck" Have a blessed spring day writing away.........

Sara Kendrick March 24, 2025 at 6:54 AM It reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Very passionate and descriptive. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K