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Lovingly Lost

Valley was vast
View was the best

Sun was about to set
For prey, birds search to get

Breeze was pleasant
Passers were complacent

Boys bath at a pool
Crows fight like a fool

Sun became a lamp
Returning home were lamb

Distantly heard was melody
Thick forest was woody

Sun surges to set
Self was easy to forget

This thought, surely shall last
As I was lovingly lost!


Above poem is adapted from the eBook “EAGLE EDUCATES ENDURANCE! AND OTHER POEMS ON NATURE ” by Mr.V.Muthu manickam. Copyright is held by V.Muthu manickam.

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Date: 12/14/2016 11:30:00 AM
Nice images ... Fine poetry ...
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V.Muthu Manickam
Date: 12/15/2016 11:12:00 PM
God gives chances to visit such places. He again gives, such emotions into us that comes out like the above poem. It is an actual scene enjoyed by me and was translated into poetry spontaneously. It is never an imagination. Please look for more. Thank you very much

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