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Loving You Is Like Stirabout

You live eternally in my heart, it will forever be rent free Beauty may be skin deep, so why is yours drowning me? My limitless adoration of you, may be maddening to see But with you in the same asylum, never will we be lonely Loving you is like stirabout, it is made fresh every day I be Consume it with brazen dates, for in them my loves decree

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Paige Hind

Date: 3/21/2023 9:41:00 AM

Beautiful, so emotional. :)

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 3/21/2023 9:48:00 AM

Sometimes I just like to show people that love is meant to be emotional. Warmly A.S.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/18/2023 1:06:00 PM

A creative/fun in love write. Have a great day writing away.............

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 3/19/2023 7:33:00 AM

A very slight nod to My Beloved Emerald Isles. Also to love in general. Once again Paula I am so greatful for you! A.S.

Di11y Da11y

Date: 3/18/2023 10:28:00 AM

Great fresh approach to a love poem :)

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 3/18/2023 11:44:00 AM

Thank you very much D.D.! Warmly A.S.

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/18/2023 9:05:00 AM

AS, this is an intriguing and fascinating poem with beautiful imagery. Blessings

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 3/18/2023 11:45:00 AM

Once again Sotto many thanks for all of the encouragement! Regards A.S.

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/18/2023 7:13:00 AM

AS, if you're not careful you are going to write a love poem. (LOL) My guess is you are in love. The 3rd line is my favorite we do tend to make fools of ourselves, we men, don't we? See you tomorrow my friend:)

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/18/2023 7:57:00 AM

My friends usually call me DT:) Every poet needs to be in love!

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 3/18/2023 7:55:00 AM

Not so much "in love" as I just enjoy writing about it. Trying to find new ways to express it in words makes me happy. LOL I may have slipped a few times already Daniel Thank you for all the support! A.S.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/18/2023 6:43:00 AM

You have a way with words. Nicely done, A.S.

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 3/18/2023 7:55:00 AM

Thank you very much Kim! Warmest regards A.S.