Loving You Is Like Stirabout

You live eternally in my heart, it will forever be rent free Beauty may be skin deep, so why is yours drowning me? My limitless adoration of you, may be maddening to see But with you in the same asylum, never will we be lonely Loving you is like stirabout, it is made fresh every day I be Consume it with brazen dates, for in them my loves decree
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Hind Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 9:41 AM
Beautiful, so emotional. :)
Scorpio Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 9:48 AM
Sometimes I just like to show people that love is meant to be emotional. Warmly A.S.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 1:06 PM
A creative/fun in love write. Have a great day writing away.............
Scorpio Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 7:33 AM
A very slight nod to My Beloved Emerald Isles. Also to love in general. Once again Paula I am so greatful for you! A.S.
Poet Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 9:05 AM
AS, this is an intriguing and fascinating poem with beautiful imagery. Blessings
Scorpio Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 11:45 AM
Once again Sotto many thanks for all of the encouragement! Regards A.S.
Turner Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 7:13 AM
AS, if you're not careful you are going to write a love poem. (LOL) My guess is you are in love. The 3rd line is my favorite we do tend to make fools of ourselves, we men, don't we? See you tomorrow my friend:)
Turner Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 7:57 AM
My friends usually call me DT:) Every poet needs to be in love!
Scorpio Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 7:55 AM
Not so much "in love" as I just enjoy writing about it. Trying to find new ways to express it in words makes me happy. LOL I may have slipped a few times already Daniel Thank you for all the support! A.S.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 6:43 AM
You have a way with words. Nicely done, A.S.
Scorpio Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 7:55 AM
Thank you very much Kim! Warmest regards A.S.
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