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Loving You

Loving you; too good to be real...was after all unreal!

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Jan Allison

May 21, 2017 at 10:43 AM

beautiful but sad one liner Sunita:-) hugs Jan xx

Sunita U.D Palawon

May 25, 2017 at 4:46 AM

Thanks indeed it was in sad mood...thanks for the read. :) Sunita

Andrea Dietrich

December 13, 2016 at 7:58 AM

I have a haiku somewhere on this same theme, so I can really relate, Sunita!

Sunita U.D Palawon

December 14, 2016 at 5:24 AM

Thanks Andrea...there so much to write on this wonderful feeling that we human are gifted with...I'll find yours and read it. GL :)

Augustus Black

December 12, 2016 at 6:04 AM

I would say this is a great write. Very smartly you have painted the sadness in this write. Beautiful... keep on going.

Sunita U.D Palawon

December 12, 2016 at 10:49 AM

Thanks friend. I appreciate you stopping by. G.Luck :)

Daniel Turner

November 2, 2016 at 12:01 PM

Very sad, Sunita.

Sunita U.D Palawon

November 2, 2016 at 8:53 PM

Indeed...Thanks Daniel for the read and appreciation.GL.

Steven Henderson

November 2, 2016 at 10:25 AM

At times it almost seems surreal. Peace unto you and many blessings.

Sunita U.D Palawon

November 2, 2016 at 8:54 PM

I agree..the flight is so high and the fall...Oh! :D Thanks for the comment. GL

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