Loving You

I dont know what to do 
anymore.

Know matter what I try,
it's never enough for you,
I'm never enough for you.

I try my best but you never,
see, all you see is what you 
want to see.

I love you with every ounce
of my soul and belive me 
when I say it's not a easy
job loving you.

But know matter how much I
love you, you dont see it, you
dont even see that I'm willing
to put hard work twords loving 
you.

Your a hard am to please, but 
I'm willing to do so, even though
I may gripe a complain.

I dont really understand what 
it is you want out of me, but
I'll try to understand, though 
it may be hard, cause we
all know, it's no secret I'm
not the brightest person ever.

But it's so hard to do so, that's 
loving and pleasing you.

Hopefully you will see one 
day, all my hard work I
put twords loving you, and 
I pray to God when you
see that, you will realize 
all the hardship you'v put
me through and stop being so
difficult.

I'm never going to stop loving 
you, know matter the hardships
I go through, even when I'm
dead and in heaven I'll still love
you.

So I'll sit here pacentily waiting 
for you to see with your heart, the 
love I have for you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006



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