Loving You

Velvety smooth I caress your face,
Lost is time of this moment and place
your scent, very mellow at first
your love of your man quenches his thirst

hands intermingle for a moment or two
and then exploration, first me and then you
your lips sweet as buttercups, softly on mine
your loving embrace it's feeling divine

Your passion, driven with desire
I can feel your heat like a volcanic fire
My heart pounding nearly out of my chest
the wanting that I feel, your incessant caress 

together we link like a fine golden chain
clasped one together,without any refrain
In that final moment, the heightening peak
so out of breath that neither can speak

suddenly sullen, we collapse with a smile
this love that we share, which none can defile
it's easy for me to love you this way
soul mates that we are and will always stay.


For Mary.....I love you.....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Palli Avatar
December 19, 2010 at 12:21 AM
so beautiful. Wonderfully expressed.
Whitlock-Ishway Avatar
December 18, 2010 at 2:05 PM
Fire hot; filled with passion, romance, and unmistakable love. Mary's a lucky woman and you're a lucky man... Love this one... Going into my fav's... Lay
Dufresne Avatar
November 20, 2010 at 10:08 AM
romantic passionate priceless poetry, my friend.
Culverhouse Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 8:21 AM
glad to see you posting again...enjoyed reading!
Dietrich Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 8:29 PM
wow, this should have been in that love letters contest or something. It is one of your best, TAz! Great passionate writing. LUv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 8:54 AM
WOW Taz u never lose your touch for creative poetic genius my friend.. this special piece is exquisite eloquence mixed with emotional passion and deep luv.. my kinda poetry my friend.. how are u and Mary doing? always enjoy seeing your names on my comments list... keep in touch ... please... God has truly blessed us here .. very thankful ....
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