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Loving You

When I woke up this morning and I saw you lying there with the sunlight through the curtains shining in your hair. I looked at you lovingly, while you lay asleep and leaned over to kiss you, gently on your cheek. We sat together at the breakfast table, with talk of the day ahead as always you had something to say, to help me clear my head. The phone rang, one of the children, needing you again and you patiently talked and listened to her, taking away her pain. When I came home in the evening, at the end of a busy day you were there at the door to meet me, in your usual way. I’d never seen you more beautiful, in the clothes you wear and I held you close to kiss you, while my hand ran through your hair. Now as I lay beside you, as you sleep, in the dark of the night I think how you always bring to my life, so much love and light. Without your love I would be, like a candle without a flame and for the close ones, who share our love, it would be the same.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/19/2011 2:17:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem. Simple and sweet and lovely.~Jodie Q
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Date: 2/18/2011 12:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Tim. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/31/2010 12:10:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Tim.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/11/2010 7:00:00 AM
Thanks for your comments Linda-Marie and your welcome to the site which I'm just figuring out how to use.. Your encouragement is going to make me want to put more of my poems on. I tend to use an easy flowing style that everyone, even if they don't read much poetry, can relate to. Tim
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Date: 3/10/2010 6:41:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... please continue to share your creative writes with us all..as this delight tonight.. especially enjoyed your luv poem..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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