Loving Through The Night

It was not love at first sight,
Although I could sense your strength and might.
We danced throughout the night, 
But you left me As soon as it became bright.

I did not know what to think, 
I was at the brink,
I was ready to go,
But something inside said no.

So began the journey, 
It lasted an eternity,
But it was worth it,
Because at the end of the night,
It was… love at first sight.
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Agustin Avatar
February 16, 2025 at 5:40 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Hind Avatar
February 13, 2025 at 7:41 PM
Hmmm, really thought about this one :)
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