Loving Eve

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Written for the contest ‘What is love?’
4 lines with maximum of 14 syllables each
Sponsored by Faraz Ajmal

Loving Eve

C Caressing the cusp of her calamitous clouds

A Atoning all angst of my alluvial angel

R Retrieving resolve for roaring rainbow’s recall

E Enlightening Eve’s essence for eternal embrace

07th August 2018

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Susan Gentry

Date: 8/11/2018 3:02:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! Wise acrostic.

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/10/2018 12:59:00 AM

Congrats!!! my friend on your fine placement...love & light...^WW^

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 8/9/2018 8:56:00 PM

Sincere congratulations on your win in Faraz's contest, Kai - blessings and best wishes ... keep up the great work, my friend! :-)

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/9/2018 7:08:00 PM

A lovely Acrostic, Kai, with beautiful sentiments about what love is. Congratulations on your win! Sandra

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/8/2018 3:34:00 PM

This is lovely Kai, but in case you are unaware, your title needs to be "Care" to be an acrostic. Congratulations on your win! : )

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 8/9/2018 3:21:00 AM

Thank you Connie for liking this. And thanks for the 'critique'. I did not know this. Always learning...

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 8/8/2018 1:20:00 PM

Such a wonderful acrostic this is, surely a joy to read, many congratulations on your position in my contest, good luck and have a really nice day

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 8/9/2018 3:21:00 AM

Thank you Faraz. I appreciate that. And thank you for sponsoring the contest. Many wishes to you, Kai