Notes About The Poem

Written for the contest ‘What is love?’
4 lines with maximum of 14 syllables each
Sponsored by Faraz Ajmal

 

Loving Eve

Loving Eve

C Caressing the cusp of her calamitous clouds

A Atoning all angst of my alluvial angel

R Retrieving resolve for roaring rainbow’s recall

E Enlightening Eve’s essence for eternal embrace

07th August 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 3:02 PM
Congratulations on your win! Wise acrostic.
Warrior Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 12:59 AM
Congrats!!! my friend on your fine placement...love & light...^WW^
Barden Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 8:56 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in Faraz's contest, Kai - blessings and best wishes ... keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
Haight Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 7:08 PM
A lovely Acrostic, Kai, with beautiful sentiments about what love is. Congratulations on your win! Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 3:34 PM
This is lovely Kai, but in case you are unaware, your title needs to be "Care" to be an acrostic. Congratulations on your win! : )
Neumann Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 3:21 AM
Thank you Connie for liking this. And thanks for the 'critique'. I did not know this. Always learning...
Ajmal Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 1:20 PM
Such a wonderful acrostic this is, surely a joy to read, many congratulations on your position in my contest, good luck and have a really nice day
Neumann Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 3:21 AM
Thank you Faraz. I appreciate that. And thank you for sponsoring the contest. Many wishes to you, Kai
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