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Lovewrecked

Nothing i say, draws me away, Deep in my mind, am always astray, Nothing she wants, stays off her way, In her web i was caught, can't get away, Help to thee i ask, humbly i pray, Help me get away, to her talons am a lost prey. ?

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Beata Agustin

Date: 10/26/2024 10:34:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/4/2016 5:54:00 AM

Anytime... Linda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/24/2016 7:36:00 PM

tomas makau, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Tomas Makau
Date: 3/4/2016 2:51:00 AM

Thanks..LINDA