Lovestruck

Giddy as a schoolgirl picking lipstick,
giggling helplessly and hopelessly in love
as joyously she taunts him with her towel, 
blissfully aware that this is Sunday,
and it's just the two of them!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Horsman Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 10:43 AM
the innocence of it all, Keith, brings back a lot of memories does this wonderful poem. harry
Collins Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 7:03 AM
The words you choose are priceless. Oh for an old Sunday like this! love, Kathy
Wesley Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 12:56 PM
Woo hoo! Maybe we make fools of ourselves when the arrow hits. Being giddy is part of the fun too Kieth, the last line suggests more to come! Lizzie
Roberts Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 11:04 AM
nice way to spend a Sunday, nice verse Keith
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