Love's Quake -N- Wave

A sudden heartquake:
Tsunami of love follows
to sweep away soul.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Chircop Avatar
November 28, 2009 at 10:10 AM
i love this tsunami indeed--Charma:)
Kendrick Avatar
November 3, 2009 at 12:00 PM
Wild love on a roll of wave. Keep writing. Sara
Devonshire Avatar
November 3, 2009 at 10:40 AM
Wow! Awesome senryu, Ismael. Very original way to describe heartbreak (or quake). Great work! Love, Carolyn
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