Loves Promised Story

Cast under a spell
never under estimate
the power that is

Love it generates 
inside out from one soul winks
with a heart's wings flies

Days spent together 
magic through happiness gold
in the sunshine smiles

Rays dazzling the sun
enchanting true love sweetly
always you're special

This gift when received
smiles one reason to live for
painted myself in

Coloring my way
out from awful pitch darkness
a soul softly speaks

Whispering treasure
swimming inside the deepest 
jewel of the sea

Blowing upon winds
loving you beautiful beams 
shines a golden path

Denial is not 
to choose a measure of peace
could not bare a world

Without such beauty
a blood eclipse falling drops
to the knees love deep
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Xia Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 12:00 PM
This has a great flow, and conveys a romantic mood, I like it!
Onclaud Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 11:17 AM
you paint this page with sweet affection, liam... well done!.. huggs
Dietrich Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 10:48 PM
what a romantic poet you are! Nice poetry!
Petersen Potter Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 10:27 PM
Very sweet and romantically written verses, Liam. Enjoyed your visit! Lol....xxxxx D.
Nance Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 9:44 PM
An amazing collection of haiku's I like the "coloring my way..." the best. hugs baby. Keep speaking sweet xx
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