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Loves Promised Story

Cast under a spell never under estimate the power that is Love it generates inside out from one soul winks with a heart's wings flies Days spent together magic through happiness gold in the sunshine smiles Rays dazzling the sun enchanting true love sweetly always you're special This gift when received smiles one reason to live for painted myself in Coloring my way out from awful pitch darkness a soul softly speaks Whispering treasure swimming inside the deepest jewel of the sea Blowing upon winds loving you beautiful beams shines a golden path Denial is not to choose a measure of peace could not bare a world Without such beauty a blood eclipse falling drops to the knees love deep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/12/2014 12:00:00 PM
This has a great flow, and conveys a romantic mood, I like it!
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Date: 9/12/2014 11:17:00 AM
you paint this page with sweet affection, liam... well done!.. huggs
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Date: 9/11/2014 10:48:00 PM
what a romantic poet you are! Nice poetry!
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Date: 9/11/2014 10:27:00 PM
Very sweet and romantically written verses, Liam. Enjoyed your visit! Lol....xxxxx D.
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Date: 9/11/2014 9:44:00 PM
An amazing collection of haiku's I like the "coloring my way..." the best. hugs baby. Keep speaking sweet xx
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