Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Loves Painting

Before you I am your canvas blank 
Delicately to paint linear and in liquid hues 
Dripping and splashing we two drank 
Forceful stimulated strokes you use  

Layering the colors upon my surface 
With a precision your brush does flow 
Emphasis laid on expressive purpose 
As your artistic viewing eye grows 

Articulate precisely what you paint 
Evoking sensuousness as you drip 
Vigorous sweeping technique no restraint 
Finesse done with your own workmanship

When strokes become feverous and fast 
To the last stroke felt with ecstasy 
To add your very own lust contrast 
Finally leaving us right here at ease



Contest; Metaphor of love
Sponsor: Bobby.May
Date; 11/1/2019

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L. J. Carber November 14, 2019 at 9:23 AM Congrats Brenda, on your win! Brenda Chiri November 15, 2019 at 7:29 AM LJ thank you so much!;)

Juliet Ligon November 13, 2019 at 9:16 AM Beautiful, sensual composition. Congrats! Brenda Chiri November 13, 2019 at 11:35 AM Juliet thank you!;)

Line Gauthier November 13, 2019 at 6:29 AM Congrats on your top win, Brenda. Well done. Brenda Chiri November 13, 2019 at 11:34 AM Thanks you Line I appreciate it!;)

Anne-Lise Andresen November 13, 2019 at 4:50 AM - Congratulations on your 1st place :) - Romantic and beautiful, Brenda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Brenda Chiri November 13, 2019 at 11:34 AM Anne-Lise thanks so much!;)

Larry Bradfield November 12, 2019 at 9:31 PM Great write, Brenda! Congratulations on the top spot! Brenda Chiri November 13, 2019 at 11:34 AM Larry thank you so much!;)

Sandra Adams November 12, 2019 at 7:09 PM beautiful...congrats on your top win :) Brenda Chiri November 12, 2019 at 7:21 PM Thank you so much Sandy!;)

John Gondolf November 12, 2019 at 6:48 PM Congrats on your win for this steamy piece, Bren, makes me want to take up painting. Hugs, John Brenda Chiri November 12, 2019 at 7:19 PM Haha! John I thought you were already an artist? You are with words my friend!;) thank you!;)

Bobby May November 12, 2019 at 6:35 PM Congratulation on your Win! Awesome write my friend!! Brenda Chiri November 12, 2019 at 7:18 PM Bobby thank you so much!;)

Elaine Perrin November 4, 2019 at 7:40 AM Fabulous! Good luck in the contest. I think this is going to be a winner ;-) x Brenda Chiri November 4, 2019 at 8:28 AM Ahh thank so much;)

Caren Krutsinger November 2, 2019 at 2:23 PM This is absolutely wonderful from start to finish. Brenda Chiri November 2, 2019 at 3:22 PM Ah thank you so very much Caren you humble me because your work is so good! You almost always bring a smile to my face! So thank you for that!;)

Freddie Robinson Jr. November 2, 2019 at 6:43 AM This is the essence of love-making poetry, Brenda! From beginning to end, it pulses w/sensuality. I'm getting a cardio workout just from reading this caliente poetry. Brain stamp this poem ink gold! And as always, your poetry stimulates the mind, body and soul. Love and more love always. Brenda Chiri November 2, 2019 at 6:49 AM Lol ahh Freddy always guaranteed to bring a smile to my lips! God I really have missed your comments! Thank you so much and as always your always welcome here on my little piece of the soup!;)

Ts Poetry November 1, 2019 at 3:13 PM The muse and his subject are soon one Brenda Chiri November 1, 2019 at 4:51 PM Yes they are I suppose! Lol But sadly not for me!;) regardless thank you T!;)

Gordon Mcconnell November 1, 2019 at 1:30 PM A rather fine piece Brenda, full of great imagery and lovely rhyme. A real enjoyable write. Hope you're having a great day, Gordon Brenda Chiri November 1, 2019 at 1:50 PM Gordon thank you so much!;)

John Fleming November 1, 2019 at 10:23 AM Just noticed the contest title...certainly does fit the bill, Brenda -- right on the money! Hope you are feeling so much better! :) john Brenda Chiri November 1, 2019 at 12:45 PM Ah thank you John but I'm not too sure! I hope so! Warm affections!;)

Kim Rodrigues November 1, 2019 at 10:12 AM Beautiful, Brenda! Brenda Chiri November 1, 2019 at 10:17 AM Thank you so much kim!;)

Tom Cunningham November 1, 2019 at 10:02 AM Love your take on the contest theme Brenda. You should write a romantic novel. Good luck. Tom Brenda Chiri November 1, 2019 at 10:17 AM Lol thank you Tom but I doubt I could do a whole book but I will check into it!;)

Caren Krutsinger November 1, 2019 at 8:02 AM I am going to have to take a long shower after reading this one. Brenda Chiri November 1, 2019 at 8:06 AM Lol Caren you make me laugh! Thank you for that and thank you for the read! I hope I did the challenge right who knows!;) your too sweet my county friend!;)