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Loves Painting

Before you I am your canvas blank Delicately to paint linear and in liquid hues Dripping and splashing we two drank Forceful stimulated strokes you use Layering the colors upon my surface With a precision your brush does flow Emphasis laid on expressive purpose As your artistic viewing eye grows Articulate precisely what you paint Evoking sensuousness as you drip Vigorous sweeping technique no restraint Finesse done with your own workmanship When strokes become feverous and fast To the last stroke felt with ecstasy To add your very own lust contrast Finally leaving us right here at ease Contest; Metaphor of love Sponsor: Bobby.May Date; 11/1/2019

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L. J. Carber

Date: 11/14/2019 9:23:00 AM

Congrats Brenda, on your win!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/15/2019 7:29:00 AM

LJ thank you so much!;)

Juliet Ligon

Date: 11/13/2019 9:16:00 AM

Beautiful, sensual composition. Congrats!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/13/2019 11:35:00 AM

Juliet thank you!;)

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/13/2019 6:29:00 AM

Congrats on your top win, Brenda. Well done.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/13/2019 11:34:00 AM

Thanks you Line I appreciate it!;)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/13/2019 4:50:00 AM

- Congratulations on your 1st place :) - Romantic and beautiful, Brenda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/13/2019 11:34:00 AM

Anne-Lise thanks so much!;)

Larry Bradfield

Date: 11/12/2019 9:31:00 PM

Great write, Brenda! Congratulations on the top spot!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/13/2019 11:34:00 AM

Larry thank you so much!;)

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/12/2019 7:09:00 PM

beautiful...congrats on your top win :)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/12/2019 7:21:00 PM

Thank you so much Sandy!;)

John Gondolf

Date: 11/12/2019 6:48:00 PM

Congrats on your win for this steamy piece, Bren, makes me want to take up painting. Hugs, John

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/12/2019 7:19:00 PM

Haha! John I thought you were already an artist? You are with words my friend!;) thank you!;)

Bobby May

Date: 11/12/2019 6:35:00 PM

Congratulation on your Win! Awesome write my friend!!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/12/2019 7:18:00 PM

Bobby thank you so much!;)

Elaine Perrin

Date: 11/4/2019 7:40:00 AM

Fabulous! Good luck in the contest. I think this is going to be a winner ;-) x

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/4/2019 8:28:00 AM

Ahh thank so much;)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/2/2019 2:23:00 PM

This is absolutely wonderful from start to finish.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/2/2019 3:22:00 PM

Ah thank you so very much Caren you humble me because your work is so good! You almost always bring a smile to my face! So thank you for that!;)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/2/2019 6:43:00 AM

This is the essence of love-making poetry, Brenda! From beginning to end, it pulses w/sensuality. I'm getting a cardio workout just from reading this caliente poetry. Brain stamp this poem ink gold! And as always, your poetry stimulates the mind, body and soul. Love and more love always.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/2/2019 6:49:00 AM

Lol ahh Freddy always guaranteed to bring a smile to my lips! God I really have missed your comments! Thank you so much and as always your always welcome here on my little piece of the soup!;)

Ts Poetry

Date: 11/1/2019 3:13:00 PM

The muse and his subject are soon one

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/1/2019 4:51:00 PM

Yes they are I suppose! Lol But sadly not for me!;) regardless thank you T!;)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 11/1/2019 1:30:00 PM

A rather fine piece Brenda, full of great imagery and lovely rhyme. A real enjoyable write. Hope you're having a great day, Gordon

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/1/2019 1:50:00 PM

Gordon thank you so much!;)

John Fleming

Date: 11/1/2019 10:23:00 AM

Just noticed the contest title...certainly does fit the bill, Brenda -- right on the money! Hope you are feeling so much better! :) john

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/1/2019 12:45:00 PM

Ah thank you John but I'm not too sure! I hope so! Warm affections!;)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/1/2019 10:12:00 AM

Beautiful, Brenda!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/1/2019 10:17:00 AM

Thank you so much kim!;)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/1/2019 10:02:00 AM

Love your take on the contest theme Brenda. You should write a romantic novel. Good luck. Tom

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/1/2019 10:17:00 AM

Lol thank you Tom but I doubt I could do a whole book but I will check into it!;)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/1/2019 8:02:00 AM

I am going to have to take a long shower after reading this one.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/1/2019 8:06:00 AM

Lol Caren you make me laugh! Thank you for that and thank you for the read! I hope I did the challenge right who knows!;) your too sweet my county friend!;)