Love's Mirage

enamoring frills
glamorous beauty distilled
burnished cloak veils heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mehta Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 4:53 AM
Lovely haiku with very suggestive images, Stephen
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May 13, 2011 at 7:45 PM
so true Stephen..when one falls in luv it is like a veil cloaking the heart from the emotion that spills out emoting that feeling.. a wonder Haiku luv..happy weekend...
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May 13, 2011 at 3:43 PM
Stephen, one can follow the attraction of physical love when hiding under goggles ... the phenomenon implanted by the heart giving you dilutions of synonyms for passionate pain,, love can be either heaven or hell.... nothing but a mirage... thanks for sharing,, take care,..Linda
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May 13, 2011 at 3:30 PM
The lustrous cloak often does hide what's within. We see the beauty on the outside, but sometimes fail to see the intent held in hearts. Very nicely done, Stephen. This would make a fine entry for Brian's contest! Love, Carolyn
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