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Love's Mirage

enamoring frills glamorous beauty distilled burnished cloak veils heart

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/14/2011 4:53:00 AM

Lovely haiku with very suggestive images, Stephen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/13/2011 7:45:00 PM

so true Stephen..when one falls in luv it is like a veil cloaking the heart from the emotion that spills out emoting that feeling.. a wonder Haiku luv..happy weekend...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2011 3:43:00 PM

Stephen, one can follow the attraction of physical love when hiding under goggles ... the phenomenon implanted by the heart giving you dilutions of synonyms for passionate pain,, love can be either heaven or hell.... nothing but a mirage... thanks for sharing,, take care,..Linda

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/13/2011 3:30:00 PM

The lustrous cloak often does hide what's within. We see the beauty on the outside, but sometimes fail to see the intent held in hearts. Very nicely done, Stephen. This would make a fine entry for Brian's contest! Love, Carolyn