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Loves Me Not

petals to recite stems, handed my beloved thorns for suicides

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/13/2012 9:46:00 AM
Wonderful haiku, well done, I think. Thanks for earlier comment on my write, loved bl
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Date: 3/14/2012 12:54:00 PM
Michael, , good afternoon. :-) this is a very deep haiku.. enjoying my time here on the soup today, God bless ¤ always PD
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Michael Perritano
Date: 3/14/2012 2:24:00 PM
Thank you, I much prefer longer poems yet, when I do shorts I love cramming words together nice and tight..glad you enjoyed..peace

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