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Love's Life Endeavor

It was many years ago, while looking for lasting love, initially I came to know a woman with radiant glow that ignited the stars above. Right from the very start I knew it was forever. She ransomed my lonely heart, and never we’d be apart; it was love’s life endeavor. January 14, 2017 Contest: 10 Lines, 5 Words: Rhyme II Sponsor: Laura Loo

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Maria Williams

Date: 1/22/2018 4:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win John, I can see why, it is beautifully expressed....Maria

John Gondolf
Date: 1/22/2018 5:09:00 AM

Thank you so much, Maria, I appreciate your comments. John

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/21/2018 9:08:00 PM

Awesome John. I love it. Congrats on your fine win.

John Gondolf
Date: 1/21/2018 9:23:00 PM

Thanks so much, Line.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/20/2018 7:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, John! Hugs Eve~`*

John Gondolf
Date: 1/20/2018 8:09:00 PM

Thank you, Eve, I appreciate it. John

Jan Allison

Date: 1/20/2018 5:38:00 PM

what a charming rhyme John, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

John Gondolf
Date: 1/20/2018 7:13:00 PM

Thank you, Jan, your support is much appreciated. John

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/20/2018 11:12:00 AM

Congratulations John :)

John Gondolf
Date: 1/20/2018 11:37:00 AM

Thank you so much, Heidi.

Lu Loo

Date: 1/20/2018 11:08:00 AM

beautifully expressed- so romantic and passionate, loved every word dear John! congrats and thank you! :)-luloo

John Gondolf
Date: 1/20/2018 11:36:00 AM

Thank you so much, Luloo, and thanks for hosting the contest.

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 1/16/2018 5:39:00 PM

You make this challenge look so easy John; what an awesome love poem! Good luck in the contest!~Che :)

John Gondolf
Date: 1/16/2018 10:26:00 PM

Thank you, Cheryl, I appreciate your comments. John

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 1/15/2018 8:25:00 PM

This is a difficult contest I dared not enter but you pulled it off. Great job, John

John Gondolf
Date: 1/16/2018 4:44:00 AM

Thank you, Rhoda, your support means a great deal to me. John

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/14/2018 7:12:00 PM

you did this SO well in the confines of the number of lines and words. You ended up with a lovely little love poem!

John Gondolf
Date: 1/14/2018 9:00:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea, I appreciate your support. John

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 1/14/2018 4:14:00 PM

Straight from the heart, pure poetry, pure expression. I hope this piece has a shot at the podium John;-)

John Gondolf
Date: 1/14/2018 5:49:00 PM

Thank you for your comments, Keith, and thanks for reading my poetry. John

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/14/2018 12:45:00 PM

A beautiful verse John , and I wish you many more years of happiness. Regards Tom.

John Gondolf
Date: 1/14/2018 2:05:00 PM

Many thanks, Tom, I appreciate you comments and visit. John

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/14/2018 11:18:00 AM

Such a wonderful poem, so beautifully expressed in so few words, John. Congratulations on your lifetime love! I can identify with your sentiments as expressed in my entry! Best wishes for the contest. Sandra

John Gondolf
Date: 1/14/2018 12:00:00 PM

Thank you, Sandra, I appreciate it and congrats on your lifelong love as well. John

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/14/2018 9:43:00 AM

Hi John, I enjoyed your take on the contest theme. Finding your soul mate and loving them is life's endeavor. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

John Gondolf
Date: 1/14/2018 12:14:00 PM

Thank you, Alexis, I always welcome your support and encouragement. John

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/14/2018 9:14:00 AM

A nice poem to read today John. I enjoyed it. You put this together well for the contest. Good luck for a win :)

John Gondolf
Date: 1/14/2018 11:58:00 AM

Thank you, Heidi, I'm glad you enjoyed it and I appreciate you support. John