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Love's Intended

On dreary days, I seldom wake for deepest dreams arise opaque and multitudes of fiends ascend dispatching poems, I've just penned. In vain I hide inside my end upon a prayer, I make amends, for all pretensions once defended are quiet now, I'm Love's intended. The dream has turned and I'm awake and shaking knees no longer quake.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/27/2012 9:47:00 PM
Well done, great poem, good luck. Lee
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Date: 7/27/2012 9:39:00 PM
Love the imagery happening here, "deepest dreams arise opaque". Can't see anything but greatness coming your way, Debs! Best wishes, love, Mikki
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Date: 7/24/2012 12:53:00 PM
The first two and last two lines convey a lot in this beautiful write my friend. If it is for a contest my good wishes for your contest entry. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra
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Date: 7/24/2012 11:08:00 AM
Interesting contest entry..Winner for sure..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by my blog..I hope your day is good...Is the trip to San Franciso over yet?...Sara
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Date: 7/24/2012 7:56:00 AM
Lovely verse Debbie love the knees not shaking ha ha xx
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