Loves Illuion

His smile is your weakness
His eyes will draw you in
His hands will heat your body 
Loves perfect little sin

His words of love will melt you
He’ll make your insides burn
His body will give you the pleasure 
That you most dearly yearn

His lips will taunt tease you
They’ll make you lose you're mind
He’ll make you forget the little things
And leave your world behind 

You’ll think that you’re in heaven 
That he’s the one you’ll keep
Not knowing all the wicked things
He plans for you in your sleep

His knife will cut and burn you
You’ll lie bleeding in his bed
Far too late you’ll realize 
That he wants you dead

Your tears will pore like rain 
As you lie dying in his sight
You’ll wonder why he did it
As you look into the night

Your soul has left this world 
And your body’s laid to rest
With no one knowing he did it
No one even guessed

You soul now walks in limbo
In a consistent state of confusion
Never thinking of the fact
That love is the greatest illusion

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 8/18/2008 5:47:00 PM
Christine - This "Rhyme" is excellent in both flow and content - Your very gifted - God Bless
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