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Loves Grip

With a whispering sigh, I feel your kiss caress my lips My heart begins to race, as I place my hands on your hips Longingly my body craves, the gentle touching of your fingertips Touch me here, touch me there, Moaning softly I feel your hands begin to slip Across my neck and down my back, Enjoying the frenzy as our clothes rip Onto the bed we slowly lay, You the ocean, and I the ship Beads of passion cascade, As we are joined together on this climactic trip Our quickened hearts both beat as one, Infused together in loves most fierce grip an arousingly poetic collab with the one and only Dan Kearley ;)) 6/16/12

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/21/2012 11:56:00 PM
Soup Mail....Oh boy! :oP
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Date: 6/19/2012 10:13:00 AM
Well...We finished it! Whew! That was something...A very intence write we did there... :o) I also got a little... Ahem.. heated while writing this masterpiece. :o)
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Germaine Elliott
Date: 6/20/2012 8:08:00 AM
(blushes) I know right !!
Date: 6/16/2012 5:39:00 PM
Germaine, this is lovely... good job to both of you..xox~pd
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Germaine Elliott
Date: 6/18/2012 10:30:00 AM
many thanks! so glad you enjoyed it!!!
Date: 6/16/2012 7:42:00 AM
What man or woman's heart would not be racing after reading such passionate words! Peace and blessings to you both.
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Germaine Elliott
Date: 6/18/2012 10:31:00 AM
why thank you! this Lady's heart was racing as we were writing it! i'm so glad you enjoyed it !

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