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Into my general path with a low voice. Included are profound love and rejoice. There will certainly be no lyrical illusion. Simply a breathtaking, supple inclusion. In the same vein as a delectable sweet. She brings joy and a soft, cherished beet. This involvement encapsulates her well. In the bliss of my life or in a crystal shell, The lightness of the wreath is uncanny. Gently pulling into every nook and cranny The depth of the loyalty is beyond compare. An immensely worthless treasure, and rare. Her compassionate and kindhearted nature It calms my heart turmoil and mind retainer. Love that cannot be evaluated or measured. That filled my soul with all that I treasured. To have her in my life is a tremendous gift. Is this love flawless, or is his barb less swift? Her dulcet apathy, sparkling as stars above, My lovely addiction, my unconditional love.
Written: June 08, 2023

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Date: 6/8/2023 2:06:00 PM
Closing stanza brings this creation to a perfect ending, imho. Ever stanza is a gem in my opinion, but closing one hits it. A fav... God bless.
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