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Love's Finest Backdrop

Shimmering stars through barren trees –
I see far as the eye can see!
For clouds are in and snuggled tight,
reveling in this midnight sky.

Others join, as one by one,
each darkened house awaits the sun;
they slumber as the night doth play
and prosper ‘til the light of day.

The cool, crisp air abates my woes;
and for a moment (though my nose is froze!),
my heavy heart is warm and certain
Love’s finest backdrop is a dark blue curtain.


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Kevin Lawrence April 2, 2023 at 10:15 AM Just beautiful, Hello. May I call you Hello? I love your use of rhyme and humor. Your visual setting brings me into your feelings. Kev, but "you can call me Al." Hello There May 5, 2023 at 11:20 AM Hi Kev. Thank you very much : )

Caren Krutsinger December 14, 2019 at 3:54 AM Gorgeous night done up so well, I feel all it needs is a Christmas bow. Not even that. It's perfect. Hello There December 14, 2019 at 8:39 AM Your comments make me smile :) Thank you so much, Caren <3

Sandra Adams December 13, 2019 at 9:05 PM this is beautiful...the full moon the other night was so magical and you could see for miles...love this my friend.... hugs Hello There December 13, 2019 at 10:21 PM Thanks so much, Sandra. Just a simple glimpse ~ so glad you enjoyed this : ) hugs

Vijay Pandit December 12, 2019 at 3:17 PM A cheerful dance of rhythmic verses, HT --your words flow brilliantly in this happy poem--excellent tone to celebrate midnight sky. Hello There December 12, 2019 at 3:19 PM Thank you so much.. Vijay ~ I'm so happy you enjoyed this piece :)

Chris Green December 12, 2019 at 2:58 PM This was beautiful my friend. Reminds me of the song, "Some enchanted evening". Love the image and how the poem brings it all to life. You know, if you cup your hands over your mouth and nose and breathe into them, you will unfreeze that nose in nose time..no time. : ) Hello There December 12, 2019 at 3:07 PM Lol. Cute ;) Thank you so much, Chris, for your lovely feedback! :)