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Loves Eternal Vision

Warm waves of you my love 
begin to rise in the deepest sea
 
Flows lovingly in one heart 
that surrounds the inner being 

Whispering gently words coated 
Mother of Pearl diamond luster 

Echoing in the ear giving faith 
to all those lost in hopeless despair 

Through the mirrors softly immersing colours 
Gently kiss upon the lips
 
Blossoming like sweet scented roses 
Fragrance from the soul in one vision 

Angel golden light flutters 
Petals falling to the ground under a bridge of sighs 

Each one vibrantly speaks 
Into a heart tears filled with joy capturing happiness

Co written by _ Liam Mc Daid and Jacinta Mc Laughlin unrhymed couplets

Copyright © Liam Mcdaid | Year Posted 2016

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Funom Makama Date: 1/25/2016 1:40:00 PM My senses in totality are in awe of your wonderful lines. Liquefied bliss from the boil of glorious words has brought out enchanting aroma beyond scaling. 7 is simply an underscore for this fine share. Login to Reply

White Sage Date: 1/22/2016 12:00:00 AM you've both done well...excellent write Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 1/16/2016 12:32:00 AM Excellent couplets and collaboration this is my dear friend, Liam and Jacinta. I enjoyed so much the read! Thank you so much for sharing! Stopping by also to greet you a Very Happy Birthday my dear friend. I wish you all the best and happiness that life ever hold! God bless! love lots and big hugs, Leonora Login to Reply

Kp Nunez Date: 1/15/2016 9:10:00 PM All that is good, soft and warm love brings...congrats on a lovely collab with Jacinta. Also, Belated Happy Birthday! Just saw Anne's poem for you. Wishing you the best this 2016 and in the years to come. Kim Login to Reply

Vladislav Raven Date: 1/15/2016 7:16:00 PM I did forget to give you and Jacinta your seven and fave old pal. Login to Reply

Vladislav Raven Date: 1/15/2016 7:15:00 PM Well my Celtic brother, let me start off by wishing you all the best for 2016. I have been off colour a little so i couldn't do it on FB. Now, this is a beautiful write as always. You both sing well together Liam. Your couplets sing. I think i have read another you did with Jacinta old friend. The pens sing so well together. As always, excellence comes forth. Let your heart always sing Liam. A wonderful collaboration. Have a good night and weekend. Your friend always....Vladislav. (M) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/15/2016 6:30:00 PM this is really pretty, both of you!! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/15/2016 6:29:00 PM Hey, belated birthday wishes. Just read the happy birthday poem for you. now let me read your poem. Login to Reply

White Sage Date: 1/15/2016 1:45:00 PM excellent couplets there Liam...you've both done it well Login to Reply

Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 1/15/2016 1:44:00 PM Hi Liam n' Jacinta!Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam, and this time in collaboration with your friend Jacinta.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written.Just awesome!A most beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding collaboration!Excellent imagery!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + to each!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^ Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/15/2016 1:01:00 PM - I can feel the warm waves of love in this beautiful poem Liam and Jacinta - Best wishes for a beautiful winter weekend for both of you - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply