Love's Debut

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Violette Poetry
Invented by Viola Gardener. It is stanzaic, rhymed, unlimited quatrains, in the aaaB cccB and so on, feminine rhyming scheme. B is a linking rhyme from stanza to stanza. Syllables, 6,6,6,4, per line.

Although you've been crying morning lost dreams dying, your heart still keeps trying to start anew. You let him walk away to his utter dismay; he's a phantom cliché you'll not pursue. Happiness was fleeting now your heart is bleeding; for once, it's caught cheating, love can't redo. Forever thoughts frighten; anxieties heighten your defenses tighten, and tears ensue. You feel you're all alone left to face the unknown lost in the twilight zone; but that's untrue. Someday, you will restart your search for a sweetheart, and your doubts will depart on Love's debut.

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Arturo Michael

Date: 3/18/2018 2:40:00 PM

A lovely poem to give to a wonderful friend...Very good Emile

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/18/2018 2:49:00 PM

Thanks so much Arturo, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/18/2018 12:53:00 PM

Lovely, Emile. A very emotive piece.

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/18/2018 1:03:00 PM

Thanks Line, as always I welcome your comments my friend, Emile.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/18/2018 11:05:00 AM

what a wonderful uplifting ending to what is a very sad situation. You've absolutely nailed this form Emile. I am sure Mick will love this one:-) hugs jan xx

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/18/2018 12:13:00 PM

Thanks so much Jan, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.