Love's Debut

It seems he's been lying and your dreams are dying, while constantly trying to start anew. You let him walk away to his utter dismay; love's merely a cliché that hearts pursue. Happiness was fleeting and your heart is bleeding; for he was caught cheating, and can't redo. Forever thoughts frighten: anxieties heighten and defenses tighten; as tears ensue. You feel you're all alone confronting the unknown within the Twilight Zone; fearing that's true. Someday, you will restart your search for a sweetheart; and watch your doubts depart on love's debut.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Michael Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 2:40 PM
A lovely poem to give to a wonderful friend...Very good Emile
Pinet Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 2:49 PM
Thanks so much Arturo, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 12:53 PM
Lovely, Emile. A very emotive piece.
Pinet Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 1:03 PM
Thanks Line, as always I welcome your comments my friend, Emile.
Allison Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 11:05 AM
what a wonderful uplifting ending to what is a very sad situation. You've absolutely nailed this form Emile. I am sure Mick will love this one:-) hugs jan xx
Pinet Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 12:13 PM
Thanks so much Jan, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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