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Although you've been crying over failed dreams dying; your heart is still trying to start anew. You let him walk away to his utter dismay; he's a phantom cliché you'll not pursue. Happiness was fleeting now your heart is bleeding; once he's caught cheating, love can't redo. Forever thoughts frighten: anxieties heighten and defenses tighten; as tears ensue. You feel you're all alone confronting the unknown within the Twilight Zone; but that's not true. Someday, you will restart your search for a sweetheart; and witness doubt depart on Love's debut.

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Date: 3/18/2018 2:40:00 PM
A lovely poem to give to a wonderful friend...Very good Emile
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/18/2018 2:49:00 PM
Thanks so much Arturo, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/18/2018 12:53:00 PM
Lovely, Emile. A very emotive piece.
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Date: 3/18/2018 1:03:00 PM
Thanks Line, as always I welcome your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/18/2018 11:05:00 AM
what a wonderful uplifting ending to what is a very sad situation. You've absolutely nailed this form Emile. I am sure Mick will love this one:-) hugs jan xx
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/18/2018 12:13:00 PM
Thanks so much Jan, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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