Lovers In the Moonlight

Lovers in the Moonlight 


If only God had made me a bluebird,
It's straight to your nest I would fly.
To feel the warmth of you again,
Never questioning~ why.

Lovers in the moonlight, we.
Perched in a fragrant apple tree.
Watching stars zoom rhapsodically.
While you flutter your eyes at me,romantically.

Oh, the thought of us together!
Doth make my feathers shake and shimmer.
My bird of eternity, soul of my soul,
My eternal love and sole soul's winner.


August 3, 2020
1:30pm PST

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 8/11/2020 3:10:00 PM
This is a beautifully romantic poem. Panagiota, you write so many I find it difficult to keep pace reading them. Keep going! I rarely comment even though I read. Must post my comments more often.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/11/2020 3:17:00 PM
Hi Krish, I fully understand, commentingbeats time like a starving Hippo. The romance ones are ny Favs, I write them, then forget them. WhennI see them later, they are brand new to me? Take care of yourself. Thank you for reading and Comnenting,,,Pangie xxx
Date: 8/4/2020 12:59:00 PM
I love this cute write. For me, it would be a red bird I would want in my nest. Enjoy your day writing away................
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/4/2020 1:04:00 PM
I love red birds,too Paula. Hope your day is sunny and creative.. thank you for taking time out of your day to comment. Pangie xx
Date: 8/4/2020 12:20:00 PM
Hello Panagiota, this is very romantic. I like this poem. enjoy your day. Hugs Darlene xxxx-oooo.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/5/2020 9:43:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, we both like this poem. hugs Darlene xxxx-oooo
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/4/2020 12:35:00 PM
Hi Darlene...I totally like this one,and glad you did, Thank you Panagiota xxxx-oooo
Date: 8/3/2020 6:38:00 PM
Endearingly romantic, Panagiota. Loved where your muse took you with this. Birds can be so romantic: swans, lovebirds, turtle doves, and of course, the bluebird of happiness! Have a great day, my friend ~ John
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/3/2020 8:03:00 PM
True, John, so true! And such lovely creatures! Love the " bluebird of happiness! ". You are so sweet. Pangie xxx
Date: 8/3/2020 2:23:00 PM
Quite a romantic verse Panagiota, you write these well. Tom
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/3/2020 7:54:00 PM
Thank you much.they all vary widely! Have you noticed? Hope that ignominious " no Coomments" Junk is gone. Sorry, this happens to you Pangie the Furious.)))
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