Lovers In the Moonlight

Lovers in the Moonlight 


If only God had made me a bluebird,
It's straight to your nest I would fly.
To feel the warmth of you again,
Never questioning~ why.

Lovers in the moonlight, we.
Perched in a fragrant apple tree.
Watching stars zoom rhapsodically.
While you flutter your eyes at me,romantically.

Oh, the thought of us together!
Doth make my feathers shake and shimmer.
My bird of eternity, soul of my soul,
My eternal love and sole soul's winner.


August 3, 2020
1:30pm PST
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Radhakrishna Avatar
August 11, 2020 at 3:10 PM
This is a beautifully romantic poem. Panagiota, you write so many I find it difficult to keep pace reading them. Keep going! I rarely comment even though I read. Must post my comments more often.
Romios Avatar
August 11, 2020 at 3:17 PM
Hi Krish, I fully understand, commentingbeats time like a starving Hippo. The romance ones are ny Favs, I write them, then forget them. WhennI see them later, they are brand new to me? Take care of yourself. Thank you for reading and Comnenting,,,Pangie xxx
Goldsmith Avatar
August 4, 2020 at 12:59 PM
I love this cute write. For me, it would be a red bird I would want in my nest. Enjoy your day writing away................
Romios Avatar
August 4, 2020 at 1:04 PM
I love red birds,too Paula. Hope your day is sunny and creative.. thank you for taking time out of your day to comment. Pangie xx
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 4, 2020 at 12:20 PM
Hello Panagiota, this is very romantic. I like this poem. enjoy your day. Hugs Darlene xxxx-oooo.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 9:43 AM
Hello Panagiota, we both like this poem. hugs Darlene xxxx-oooo
Romios Avatar
August 4, 2020 at 12:35 PM
Hi Darlene...I totally like this one,and glad you did, Thank you Panagiota xxxx-oooo
Watt Avatar
August 3, 2020 at 6:38 PM
Endearingly romantic, Panagiota. Loved where your muse took you with this. Birds can be so romantic: swans, lovebirds, turtle doves, and of course, the bluebird of happiness! Have a great day, my friend ~ John
Romios Avatar
August 3, 2020 at 8:03 PM
True, John, so true! And such lovely creatures! Love the " bluebird of happiness! ". You are so sweet. Pangie xxx
Cunningham Avatar
August 3, 2020 at 2:23 PM
Quite a romantic verse Panagiota, you write these well. Tom
Romios Avatar
August 3, 2020 at 7:54 PM
Thank you much.they all vary widely! Have you noticed? Hope that ignominious " no Coomments" Junk is gone. Sorry, this happens to you Pangie the Furious.)))
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