Lover's Cruise

My love, when will it last,
the heart o' mine longing for you,
with each beat of my pulse, 
solely dedicated too.

I offer you my life,
and promise that forever,
I'll be yours and you're mine,
no one can break us apart.

Oh, tell when it's wrong,
to fight for love and conquers all,
Why does it need to break our wings,
to fly  freely beyond this earth.

Hold my hands and close your eyes,
the night is ours, let's cruise the lines.
Nothing's gonna stop us now,
I am yours and you are mine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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May 8, 2023 at 7:35 PM
Well don, love it
Breidenthal Avatar
May 8, 2023 at 3:26 PM
A wonderful and imaginative poem about adoration. Loved it!
Dietrich Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 2:57 PM
this is a nice lyrical poem I found way back here from 2013! I see it won a ballad contest once. So a very belated congrats for that!
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December 19, 2013 at 1:46 PM
Aiyah. Congratulations, and thank you for supporting the Ballad contest.... Forever- Linda
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December 19, 2013 at 3:11 PM
oh....thank you, LInda :)) ..i'm speechless..hehe...Thank you so much!!! ^_^
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