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Behold today your name engraves my sky Indeed my eyes your face alone espy You own my mind no matter how I try To stay alive to issues lurking by. Alone my world was empty and a gloom With you my life compares to August bloom Alone I only craved a peaceful tomb With you my fortunes wallow now in boom. A vow I make to live within your heart A sword or speech can never pull apart My hand in yours together we depart To paradise on lovely lovers' cart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 2/11/2013 4:01:00 AM
Very touching! Glad I read it.
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Date: 4/21/2012 3:04:00 PM
lovely piece dear..enjoyed reading this
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Date: 3/13/2012 7:55:00 AM
I liked the way you used "paradise" as a verb! Peace & blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 3/5/2012 7:31:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this morn..I like the arrangement of the ten syllable count..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara
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Esson Alumbugu
Date: 3/7/2012 7:11:00 AM
Thanks for reading my poem Sara. ~ESSON
Date: 2/29/2012 4:04:00 PM
Beautiful poem Esson - enjoy it alot !Thank you for written it. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Esson Alumbugu
Date: 3/1/2012 3:50:00 PM
Hey Anne, thanks for stopping and being so kind ~ Love, ESSON.