Lovers

He: this is not fair 
This is something i can't bear
What's the wrong with me being poor and you being rich
If we will share the same salt pinch!

She: i can't believe this either!
We must fulfill our love 
I'm Rome and you're my caesar
This can't be put off

He: here is not the place we belong 
We should be in heaven 
There our love can be so strong 
And we would be there even

She: we shall die together 
To rest from all the suspicious eyes
Here are two poisoned drinks 
So we can meet in paradise 

He: finally we will live happily
With no more disguise 
I really like your idea 
It's so insightful and wise 

She: i wanted us to live together 
But i can not see you dying
So i didn't put poison in your cup 
I just put in mine! 

He: i knew you would do such thing 
Because you really worth trust 
You know i love you very much
That's why i have switched the c......!
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Ajmal Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 7:46 AM
Such a beautiful written poem, it truly touch my heart, well people told me that poetry is all about been clear about your feelings, emotions and imaginations and I can t see a better way in which you can describe them more clearly, really beautiful write, I could see the love both of them have for each other, may God bless you
A. Sharma Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 1:57 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Mohamed!
A  Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 1:45 AM
sweet win... SKAT
A   Avatar
April 2, 2015 at 7:53 PM
Mohamed, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 2:27 PM
Congratulations on your win Mohamed
Adel  Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 7:04 AM
thank you Brenda so much :)
Mehta Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 6:36 AM
Congrats on the win, Mohamed
Adel  Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 7:04 AM
thank you Dr.Ram very much :)
A   Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 9:33 PM
Mohamed, Congratulations, :) enjoy your win, and stop by my latest blog "We Will Never Know" if you have time, or if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Adel  Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 7:06 AM
thank you LINDA so much, and of course i will :)
A  Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 8:01 PM
MOHAMED, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Adel  Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 8:14 PM
Hello SKAT :) thank you very much for reading the poem and also commenting, the honor would be mine to be a friend of yours :) , i hope to know more of you and of the other poets here over time and all of us become friends :)
Andresen Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 7:59 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Mohamed - I choose your first moving/sad written poem - Well done - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Adel  Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 7:11 PM
Thank you Anne Lise so much :) and I'm so glad to be part of poetrysoup and its wonderful poets :)
Sietesantos Avatar
August 23, 2014 at 11:53 PM
This is such a deep powerful inspirational write! Bravo! A warm welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings! Pandita
Adel  Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 2:14 AM
Thank you Pandita very much, I'm really happy you liked it :)
Nance Avatar
August 22, 2014 at 7:33 PM
that is such a sad tale, well said, you drawn me in a kept me hooked. Well done! Welcome to poetrysoup.
Adel  Avatar
August 22, 2014 at 7:58 PM
Thank you Casarah so much, I'm really glad you liked it :)
A   Avatar
August 22, 2014 at 2:10 PM
Mohamed,,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Adel  Avatar
August 22, 2014 at 6:58 PM
Thank you Linda very much :) i hope you enjoyed my humble poem :) i can't wait to read some of yours and which contest do you mean? because i found many
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