Lovers

Take root deep in me
Trickle down my skin
I did rest my trigger on your finger
And you pulled it again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Polgar Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 8:17 PM
Great poem. Subtle and very sensual.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
May 4, 2013 at 6:35 AM
Wow a short abstract verse pend so awesome!
Merryman Avatar
March 31, 2013 at 4:23 PM
Joanna, congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Taylor Avatar
March 31, 2013 at 11:38 AM
Congrats, Joanna. Well done. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
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March 30, 2013 at 10:58 PM
Joanna, congratulations with your awesome love poem.... rendering the best part of life~ always*LINDA
Makama Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 10:14 AM
beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!
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