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Lovers

Take root deep in me Trickle down my skin I did rest my trigger on your finger And you pulled it again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/4/2013 8:17:00 PM
Great poem. Subtle and very sensual.
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Date: 5/4/2013 6:35:00 AM
Wow a short abstract verse pend so awesome!
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Date: 3/31/2013 4:23:00 PM
Joanna, congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/31/2013 11:38:00 AM
Congrats, Joanna. Well done. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 3/30/2013 10:58:00 PM
Joanna, congratulations with your awesome love poem.... rendering the best part of life~ always*LINDA
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Date: 3/23/2013 10:14:00 AM
beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!
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