Lovers

.                              diary of river banks
                                    lovers lay on sand blankets
                                                         ....August moon blushes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Canady Avatar
September 23, 2009 at 2:39 PM
Aaaah... Young and In Love, with Only A Care to Dare .... Sensual Sight for The River Banks, eh? Very Nice Write, Abe... MoonBee
Knop Avatar
September 22, 2009 at 8:43 AM
Thank's for you commenting my poem So far, Abe! If you#d like you could see some of my pictures on facebook. Gert
Richards Avatar
September 22, 2009 at 8:39 AM
Mail delivery!
Moreno Avatar
September 22, 2009 at 1:04 AM
Left you some mail
Harper Avatar
September 21, 2009 at 12:29 PM
love the romance man i love to be on the riverbanks..........FISHIN!
Moreno Avatar
September 21, 2009 at 10:27 AM
You have a way with words, this is pure fire!!!
Joseph Avatar
September 21, 2009 at 9:05 AM
oh nice. what is better than lovemaking under the August moon?
Richards Avatar
September 21, 2009 at 8:30 AM
Oooooooo la la.....that pink-faced man in the moon better divert his eyes.......Any river banks close by in Gracemont?? :)
Knop Avatar
September 21, 2009 at 7:18 AM
I do like your line "Diary of river banks".... Well written Senryu, Abe! Thank you for commenting "Out of the Blue" and pls. comment also on my poem "So far". Gert
Shahwan Avatar
September 21, 2009 at 6:35 AM
Poised beautifully. Pls comment my poem SleepAloof..thankfully.
Chircop Avatar
September 21, 2009 at 6:33 AM
i can picture this moment Abe,two lovers on sand blankets,diary of river banks,and i love the last verse ,making the August moon blush..miust have been naughty:)--to my favs,many beautiful writes today,many inspired--excellent--CHARMA
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