Lovers

. diary of river banks lovers lay on sand blankets ....August moon blushes

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Moonbee Canady

Date: 9/23/2009 2:39:00 PM

Aaaah... Young and In Love, with Only A Care to Dare .... Sensual Sight for The River Banks, eh? Very Nice Write, Abe... MoonBee

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/22/2009 8:43:00 AM

Thank's for you commenting my poem So far, Abe! If you#d like you could see some of my pictures on facebook. Gert

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/22/2009 8:39:00 AM

Mail delivery!

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/22/2009 1:04:00 AM

Left you some mail

Savannah Rose Harper

Date: 9/21/2009 12:29:00 PM

love the romance man i love to be on the riverbanks..........FISHIN!

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/21/2009 10:27:00 AM

You have a way with words, this is pure fire!!!

Veronica Joseph

Date: 9/21/2009 9:05:00 AM

oh nice. what is better than lovemaking under the August moon?

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/21/2009 8:30:00 AM

Oooooooo la la.....that pink-faced man in the moon better divert his eyes.......Any river banks close by in Gracemont?? :)

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/21/2009 7:18:00 AM

I do like your line "Diary of river banks".... Well written Senryu, Abe! Thank you for commenting "Out of the Blue" and pls. comment also on my poem "So far". Gert

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 9/21/2009 6:35:00 AM

Poised beautifully. Pls comment my poem SleepAloof..thankfully.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/21/2009 6:33:00 AM

i can picture this moment Abe,two lovers on sand blankets,diary of river banks,and i love the last verse ,making the August moon blush..miust have been naughty:)--to my favs,many beautiful writes today,many inspired--excellent--CHARMA