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L ive your life level bes T. O cean of tears - cease this fiasc O. V iva la Vida, never to see he R E ver again, except death comes soo N. R omantic days and nights platea U. S uppose you don’t switch off the bedlam P? *Live life

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Date: 7/7/2024 5:47:00 AM
Congrats on your win Kim, Very nicely done
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/7/2024 10:28:00 AM
Thank you, Joe! It was a fun contest!
Date: 7/6/2024 1:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative Double Acrostic write. Have a great day/weekend..............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/7/2024 10:27:00 AM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 6/28/2024 6:31:00 AM
Creatively woven---impressive!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/28/2024 8:46:00 AM
Thank you so much! I had fun writing for this contest!
Date: 6/27/2024 3:39:00 PM
way out of the box, this one kim...or there isn't really a box...very engaging! thank you lots for your eagle eyes...typo error for me as i was writing all these from my cellphone...huggs!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/27/2024 4:28:00 PM
Thank you so much, Nette! Hugs :)
Date: 6/27/2024 12:57:00 PM
Cute one, Kim. I really enjoy this challenge.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/27/2024 1:43:00 PM
Me too! :)Thanks!
Date: 6/27/2024 11:05:00 AM
Nice double acrostic... death can come too soon... so can the end of a relationship..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/27/2024 11:53:00 AM
Thank you! True enough of a relationship.
Date: 6/27/2024 10:54:00 AM
I am going to fav this- wow, Kim...this is quite original<3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/27/2024 11:53:00 AM
I so appreciate, Paige! xx

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