Lover s Torn Up

L ive your life level bes T.
O cean of tears - cease this fiasc O.
V iva la Vida,  never to see he R
E ver again, except death comes soo N.
R omantic days and nights platea U.
S uppose you don’t switch off the bedlam P?

*Live life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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May Avatar
July 7, 2024 at 5:47 AM
Congrats on your win Kim, Very nicely done
Rodrigues Avatar
July 7, 2024 at 10:28 AM
Thank you, Joe! It was a fun contest!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 6, 2024 at 1:25 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative Double Acrostic write. Have a great day/weekend..............
Rodrigues Avatar
July 7, 2024 at 10:27 AM
Thank you, Paula!
Pedrus Avatar
June 28, 2024 at 6:31 AM
Creatively woven---impressive!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 28, 2024 at 8:46 AM
Thank you so much! I had fun writing for this contest!
Onclaud Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 3:39 PM
way out of the box, this one kim...or there isn't really a box...very engaging! thank you lots for your eagle eyes...typo error for me as i was writing all these from my cellphone...huggs!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 4:28 PM
Thank you so much, Nette! Hugs :)
Dietrich Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 12:57 PM
Cute one, Kim. I really enjoy this challenge.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 1:43 PM
Me too! :)Thanks!
One Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 11:05 AM
Nice double acrostic... death can come too soon... so can the end of a relationship..
Rodrigues Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 11:53 AM
Thank you! True enough of a relationship.
Hind Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 10:54 AM
I am going to fav this- wow, Kim...this is quite original<3
Rodrigues Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 11:53 AM
I so appreciate, Paige! xx
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