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Lover of the Sea

The sea is a wild feast -
my heart in breast beating.
The sea, a hungry beast,
tug of war competing.
My feet dissolve in its wake.

I wade out to meet the waves.
Ebb and flow of friendship.
Salty air above my waist.
The wind sloshes my lips.
My cheeks, a blush sunbake.

I dive into the sublime sea.
Turquoise eyes of treachery
allow my vivacity and glee;
kindness swashed with brevity.
Breathless - make no mistake,

I listen to mermaids’ environs,
avoid pitfalls’ overconfidence,
cover ears, stave off sirens,
not greedy for DL opulence.*
Finless and feckless mistake,

if I find myself too far from shore,
arms and foam in dosido,
afraid and pleasured by the roar -
in fearful pretense, I’m paddling slow.
For the dorsal fin of ship, I ache.

Calypso music distracts on deck.
I leave my lover far below unchecked.
Climbing like a pirate to wreck
the captain’s safety, the sea at my neck.
Drowned in seaweed silk; bound and awake.

8/30/2021

*DL - Davy’s Locker
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Hind Avatar
August 20, 2024 at 4:39 PM
Your command of words to make the reader feel you is breathtaking, Kim. I love the flow of rhyme, all your own. The last line ends it beautifully. <3
Kaufman Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 7:46 AM
this is truly one of your best Kim Wonderful and powerful poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 10:19 AM
Thank you so much!
Jayasankar Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 10:47 AM
So beautiful rhyme Kim.. "my feet dissolves in its wake.. "... loved it... Hugs... ~ Ani
Rodrigues Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 3:51 PM
Thank you so much, Anitha!
Sands Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 5:57 AM
Wow. Powerful poem. . Well written. I hope all is well :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 2:31 PM
Thank you, Heidi!
Daniel Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 1:57 AM
A beautiful rhyme, Kim, loved reading it:)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 3:08 AM
Thank you, sweet Jo!
Ball Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 3:04 PM
Beautiful Kim. However there are things in the ocean that are big enough to consider us part of the food chain. I stay close to shore. Lovely write and the pic is lovely. God Bless, JB
Rodrigues Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 7:53 PM
LOL! That is true enough. Went snorkeling in Cozumel. We were told not to go near “the blur of blue” (open ocean and who knows what is over there! ;)
Mcintosh Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 11:44 AM
This is amazing. I love love love it! I'm not as much of a sea lover as I am a river lover... but love your poem so. God bless you friend. Love, Gina
Rodrigues Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 7:52 PM
That’s fun! A particular river…local or major?
Callus Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 2:21 AM
No doubt about it...you are a sea lover, Kim :) A delightful poem, and the rhyme scheme is worthy of mention. I love swimming in the sea, especially now that the water is at 28C. ~ Regards // paul
Rodrigues Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 7:51 PM
Love the sea…miss the cruises!
Buhagiar Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 1:21 AM
Used to love the sea. In Malta we have a proverb: The belly of the is soft, but it is hard headed. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 7:51 PM
Thanks for sharing the saying! Never heard that one.
Cunningham Avatar
August 31, 2021 at 12:05 PM
I too love the sea but you're right in can turn into a ferocious beast. Well written Kim. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
August 31, 2021 at 12:21 PM
Don’t turn your back on it! Thank you, Tom!
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