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Lover Don'T Leave

Give me a bit of credit, I was told that's how you fed it. The hole in your sole, filled with bright light, shone from a lover with deep insight. welled up with feelings all warm and driven, completeness remains, a love that is given. a heart made aware, a long to receive. give give give yo lover don't leave!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/20/2017 8:33:00 AM
Such a beautiful written poem, well I also like your previous poem I want you to stay but I decided to comment on this one, all of your poems as really deep and your feelings are clear you ve done a really nice job as poetey is all about being able to express your emotions, anyway can you do me a favour, can you plz read my poems as well and tell me how they are
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