Lover

She took me in and turned me into a lover.
Will she open the doors again for I crave the light?!
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Agustin Avatar
August 3, 2024 at 10:57 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Gauthier Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 8:00 PM
Lovely poem, Priyanka. Congrats on your podium finish.
Roper Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 9:50 PM
Congratulations on your in Silent One's contest. Hugs Eve
Chugh Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 2:02 AM
Thankyou Eve :)
Dietrich Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 5:55 PM
I really like this one and its theme. Congrats on the win.
Chugh Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 2:03 AM
Thankyou :)
Andresen Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 1:39 PM
- A beautiful ku duet, Priyanka :) - Congratulations on a 2st place in the contest :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Chugh Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 2:04 AM
Thankyou :)
Roy Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 8:05 AM
Nicely written, Priyanka. God bless you.
Chugh Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 2:04 AM
Thankyou :)
One Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 7:14 AM
hopefully she will.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.
Chugh Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 2:05 AM
Thankyou! :)
Somadas Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 6:34 AM
Good one..
Chugh Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 7:31 AM
Thankyou! :)
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