Lovely Sundress Girl

She had on this lovely sundress
Innocent curious look in blue
A full figured fiery fifteen with
Passion that will warm any coldest heart.
Heart full of love of a gentle dove
Behold her face all-rich.
Her seductive look makes one to stoop
Deep grey eyes can lead anyone astray
Round ear-ring makes whirl around
Waist can send anyone on quest
Her pouty lips reminds of Jolie
Nature gave her in abundance nothing redundant
But O girlie, beware of the ensnared eyes 


Oh, Oh, no more, no more, 
Remember, Remember
No more yearnings go to your learning’s
Remember your rammed memories
Pluck not the flower
Let it be the delight of other travelers
Do I have to remind you of what you penned?
Very recently on John Keats and Shelley.
Let the beauty be floating
And sink the beast to unfathomable depth.

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November 29, 2014
Form Lyric
Third Place Win    
N.B. Based on John Elton's song (Don't remember the words of the song)
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Johnson-Saunders Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 3:16 PM
Amazing poem from you, Dr. Ram! Congrats!! Hugs, Rhonda
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 1:56 PM
Congratulations on your win Dr. Mehta
Yvonne Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 8:18 AM
A stunning write, congratulations on your win!
Allison Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 1:45 AM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Kayode Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 10:56 PM
This is loving and lovely,congrats on the win Dr. ...huggs
Deschler Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 10:20 PM
You've seen the true beauty within this girl, and sometimes we need to be reminded of that which we are... Well done! Congrats on your win, Dr. Ram!
Mehta Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 8:50 PM
Thanks, kelly
Allison Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 4:05 PM
wonderful imagery Dr Ram i enjoyed your lyirc:-) hugs Jan x
Meade Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 9:27 AM
Wise words for the world does not protect the beautiful . . .
Carney Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 8:18 AM
You did well with your stanza break. Each stanza, juxtaposed by words only, as one involves description of a beauty at 15, and then the hammer is dropped, oh what a change to the second stanza, a stern warning. I liked this. Congrats. Thomas
Andresen Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 8:13 AM
- Oh.... a very lovely poem Dr.Ram - I wish you a beautiful weekend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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