Lovely Spring

Stressless and cheerful is the childhood ,
We had nothing to do but only to play  ,
Screams and laughs tastes of livelihood ,
For like glistening stars we lay .
Life so colourful ,
No eyebrows furrowed ,
But now so stressful ,
With smiles so narrowed .
Serious and caught up are we ,
No time to spare  ,
Endless nights awake we be ,
The twinkling eyes so rare .
Its summer now the spring has passed ,
Lots of memories  ,
Terribly missed ,
This is the reality away from the world of fantasies .

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Date: 11/18/2020 3:10:00 AM
I love your opening line.. if only it lasted forever. Thank you for your comments on my poem The Lady. Poetry Hugs. Cal Bambi.
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Disha Munot
Date: 11/18/2020 3:16:00 AM
Thank you , Cal...stay healthy and safe .
Date: 11/17/2020 9:23:00 PM
Indeed, Disha, Spring is so lovely and carefree. But challenges and hardships of Summer and Autumn can take its toll. I admired you last impactful line for a great finish! Melancholy spills with wistful and pensive beauty from your pen. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Disha Munot
Date: 11/17/2020 9:42:00 PM
Thank you , Susan ...have a wonderful day and stay safe
Date: 11/7/2020 8:24:00 PM
For sure some of us can relate... xoxo
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Date: 11/5/2020 8:56:00 AM
This is a sad poem Disha, life can get difficult, but we must learn to deal with adversity..
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Disha Munot
Date: 11/5/2020 9:13:00 AM
Yes...sad one but I terribly miss it so might as well thought we all will relate ...thank you
Date: 11/5/2020 8:49:00 AM
Disha, this is a lovely, nostalgic write that all of us can relate to. A Fave for me. When I was young I couldn't wait to be a "grown-up." Oh well ... ~Mark
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Date: 11/5/2020 9:14:00 AM
Thank you Mark ...yup me too but yes that is what life is all about . Stay safe
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