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Lovely Red

You are lovely red
Flame of forest everywhere
Red Che in the air
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March 3, 2016
Syllables: 5-7-5 (www.howmanysyllables.com)
Che is Che Guevara

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Poet Destroyer A

March 14, 2016 at 11:06 PM

Probir, CONGRATS on your reddish theme. Luv ~LINDA~

Probir Gupta

March 14, 2016 at 11:39 PM

I expected something red to read. But alas! Anyway, thank you so much nevertheless....

Timothy Hicks

March 5, 2016 at 2:44 AM

I've never heard of Che Guevara (aside from my very brief Wikipedia look-up) ... interesting contrast with the first two lines. Sometimes forest fires need to happen, for new trees to spring anew (that's how pine trees operate, anyhow). Well done on your placement.

Probir Gupta

March 5, 2016 at 8:22 AM

Not heard of Che? Is it possible? Interesting. Nowhere contrast. In that case, no haiku would have come off.....Flame of forest is a tropical flower, wild red in colour. And as you have checked from Wikipedia, you can certainly relate red to Che.... . Thank you......