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Lovely Red

You are lovely red Flame of forest everywhere Red Che in the air --------------------------------------------- March 3, 2016 Syllables: 5-7-5 (www.howmanysyllables.com) Che is Che Guevara

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Date: 3/14/2016 11:06:00 PM
Probir, CONGRATS on your reddish theme. Luv ~LINDA~
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/14/2016 11:39:00 PM
I expected something red to read. But alas! Anyway, thank you so much nevertheless....
Date: 3/5/2016 2:44:00 AM
I've never heard of Che Guevara (aside from my very brief Wikipedia look-up) ... interesting contrast with the first two lines. Sometimes forest fires need to happen, for new trees to spring anew (that's how pine trees operate, anyhow). Well done on your placement.
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Date: 3/5/2016 8:22:00 AM
Not heard of Che? Is it possible? Interesting. Nowhere contrast. In that case, no haiku would have come off.....Flame of forest is a tropical flower, wild red in colour. And as you have checked from Wikipedia, you can certainly relate red to Che.... . Thank you......
Date: 3/4/2016 1:26:00 PM
Hi Probir, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Enjoyed the Haiku.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/4/2016 11:06:00 PM
Thank you...
Date: 3/3/2016 8:09:00 PM
Great image, Probir. Congrats on the win
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Date: 3/3/2016 8:14:00 PM
Thank you Andrea...
Date: 3/3/2016 6:53:00 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Probir
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/3/2016 8:07:00 PM
Thank you Nayda...
Date: 3/3/2016 6:35:00 PM
Congratulations in the contest "Red" win, Probir. Hugs dear friend
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/3/2016 8:10:00 PM
A Che-imbued thank you S.O....
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/3/2016 8:08:00 PM
A red thank you Eve...

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