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Lovely Moon

Imprinted flash of thine eye Painted on vastness of sky Embrace of warmth and limelight Radiates my sullen night Recaptured treasures of hope Withstand all debris of slope Basking under the lagoon, Reminds me of lovely moon

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Date: 1/26/2024 6:10:00 PM
Dear Joseph, your Couplets are wonderful in both rhymes and imagery. I especially like "Embrace of warmth and limelight". Vivid and lovely. Belated congrats for your fine win in Silent One's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/3/2024 7:33:00 PM
Congratulations, Joe!
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Date: 1/3/2024 10:03:00 AM
Beautiful, Joseph. Congrats
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Date: 1/1/2024 10:45:00 AM
Nice rhyme, flow and imagery in your poem Joseph.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Joseph Bueno
Date: 1/5/2024 10:15:00 PM
Thank you so much for this opportunity.

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