Lovely Moon

Imprinted flash of thine eye
Painted on vastness of sky 
Embrace of warmth and limelight
Radiates my sullen night
Recaptured treasures of hope
Withstand all debris of slope
Basking under the lagoon,
Reminds me of lovely moon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ashley Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 6:10 PM
Dear Joseph, your Couplets are wonderful in both rhymes and imagery. I especially like "Embrace of warmth and limelight". Vivid and lovely. Belated congrats for your fine win in Silent One's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Rodrigues Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 7:33 PM
Congratulations, Joe!
Dietrich Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 10:03 AM
Beautiful, Joseph. Congrats
One Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 10:45 AM
Nice rhyme, flow and imagery in your poem Joseph.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Bueno Avatar
January 5, 2024 at 10:15 PM
Thank you so much for this opportunity.
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