Jay Loveless Poet I do not know?

Lovely Lips

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                       .love                          breaks 
              open our soft veins,        ready to devour,
          the sweetness that lives     in our extacy, each kiss,
each look, each beat of our open hearts, love takes advantage, 
   of us, in such a succulent, sweet, passionate, corrupted way,
        we are devoured by its greedy, power-hungry beast,
               we are captured for our lust and all else
                   that exists without us, one love.

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Charmaine Chircop May 14, 2010 at 12:46 PM awesome.. .Charma

Daver Austin May 14, 2010 at 11:35 AM Yes! Love is blind. "Love takes advanage of us." You nailed it. Good read. Love, daver

Poet Destroyer A May 12, 2010 at 1:37 PM you are so right, we are taken in by the hunger, and eaten like if it is nothing. s.m.

Carolyn Devonshire May 12, 2010 at 11:59 AM Rainbow, I love the way you drew the lips! You are about to join Charmaine as the passion princesses on Poetry Soup. Very nice. Soup mail in a moment. Best wishes, Carolyn

John Loving Iii May 12, 2010 at 11:51 AM i think you could catagorize this as shapes as to the form. john