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Lovely Lips

. .love breaks open our soft veins, ready to devour, the sweetness that lives in our extacy, each kiss, each look, each beat of our open hearts, love takes advantage, of us, in such a succulent, sweet, passionate, corrupted way, we are devoured by its greedy, power-hungry beast, we are captured for our lust and all else that exists without us, one love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/14/2010 12:46:00 PM
awesome.. .Charma
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Date: 5/14/2010 11:35:00 AM
Yes! Love is blind. "Love takes advanage of us." You nailed it. Good read. Love, daver
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Date: 5/12/2010 1:37:00 PM
you are so right, we are taken in by the hunger, and eaten like if it is nothing. s.m.
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Date: 5/12/2010 11:59:00 AM
Rainbow, I love the way you drew the lips! You are about to join Charmaine as the passion princesses on Poetry Soup. Very nice. Soup mail in a moment. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 5/12/2010 11:51:00 AM
i think you could catagorize this as shapes as to the form. john
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