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Lovely Blonde Locks

Rapunzel, Rapunzel, such beautiful hair
I bet it needs a lot of care
Oh how I love these lovely blonde locks
And those blue eyes, ever ready to shock

The tower in which you so sweetly sang
And all around the echo of your haunting melody rang
Often you’d let down your curly tresses
For the young prince’s hot caresses

Those wild kisses and encircling arms
Away from prying eyes of people on the farms
The evil witch in her scarlet coat
Would come visiting by the boat

And sternly call from right under
Her shrill voice would ring like thunder
Rapunzel, Rapunzel, let down your hair
That I might climb the golden stair

Enchanting is this love tale
That children have heard all around the vale
And preserved to be retold again
The world will a lot from this gain

25/07/2011

By Tahera Mannan
For Linda’s ‘Disney’ contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/11/2011 10:48:00 PM
* “What A Wonderful Reflection In The Sweetness of Your Beauties Precious Heart * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Tahera * I Am Not Familiar With This Fairytale Although I Remember Hearing Her Name As A Child * Perhaps One Day I Shall View It & Possibly Then Be Able to Find Even More Glitterings From Within Your Beauties Lovely Verse * Also, As Was & Is * Joy * Whenever I Am Sooo Blessed By Your Treasures Visit * Thank You * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *
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Date: 8/16/2011 8:57:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Tahera. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 8/16/2011 11:36:00 AM
I recently watched Tangled again and it was such a fun movie-- enjoyed reading this, Tahera :) Super congrats on your win :D
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Date: 8/16/2011 8:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's "Disney" contest Tahera. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/16/2011 3:04:00 AM
hey Tahera congrats on your win David
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Date: 8/15/2011 10:32:00 PM
Tahera, Great to see your worthy poem honored in second place. Way to Go! Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/15/2011 7:26:00 PM
Congrats Tahera on second place win in my contest.. wonderful luv..
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Date: 7/25/2011 11:54:00 AM
I had a smile on my face after i read this poem. great rhyme. All the best.
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Date: 7/25/2011 10:13:00 AM
oh thankxx Tahera for supporting my current contest "DISNEY"..good luck luv.. am quite sure will be awed and amazed by your choice of character.... enjoying pleasant day ..luv..
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