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Lovely

Will I go another day bathed in her disdain? Or will she embrace me, and take away my pain? I look at her face I know what I feel. Is it young love Is love even real? Can love be a ladder, from the pit of despair? If I come to her Will she even care? She keeps me awake, She doesn't even know I see her face My heart starts to glow It really sucks to be a loser in love

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Date: 3/26/2016 9:31:00 PM
Brent Becker, you've expressed yourself well, I like the way you ended the poem. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Happy Easter ** LOVE LINDA
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Date: 8/10/2015 6:55:00 PM
BRENT, a wonderful read.... LOVE *SKAT*
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