Lovelorne

Who can help me fall in love? Let my poor heart see. Better as two together. Beating wild and free. Forget my sad past. Make this awful pain fade fast. Find a love to last. 14/09/2017 Seguidilla form for Mystic Rose's contest Help Me Fall In Love.

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Chigbo Solomon Peter

Date: 10/23/2017 4:44:00 PM

True love story, if you haven't been there, you can't paint it. Beautiful lines there

Jean Murray
Date: 10/24/2017 3:51:00 AM

Thank you Chigbo. My first love broke my heart at eighteen, forty years ago. It has yet to fully recover from the shock.

Brian Davey

Date: 10/22/2017 2:36:00 PM

Oh the search for true love such a task it is, congrats

Jean Murray
Date: 10/22/2017 3:56:00 PM

God loves a Trier Brian. Thank you.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 10/22/2017 7:48:00 AM

Yes, everyone wants a love that will last forever. Congrats Jean, for your WIN in the contest! ;-)

Jean Murray
Date: 10/22/2017 3:55:00 PM

Thank you Teddy.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/21/2017 6:49:00 PM

Jean, congratulations on your win well done.. :) Hugs Eve ~`*

Jean Murray
Date: 10/22/2017 2:42:00 AM

Good morning Eve. Thank you.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/14/2017 6:58:00 AM

A melody of love and emotion--you did it well in such a short poem--so much said in so few words--well done, Jean!

Jean Murray
Date: 9/14/2017 7:32:00 AM

Hello again Vijay. My wee heart's story has been so well chronicled in these pages, I'm sure those super Soupers who have been with me since the start are hoping I DO fall in love again. A change of pace is long overdue.