Jean Murray Poet Rhyme

Lovelorne

Who can help me fall in love?
    Let my poor heart see.
        Better as two together.
            Beating wild and free.
               Forget my sad past.
                 Make this awful pain fade fast.
                    Find a love to last.


14/09/2017
 Seguidilla form for Mystic Rose's contest 
Help Me Fall In Love.

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Chigbo Solomon Peter October 23, 2017 at 4:44 PM True love story, if you haven't been there, you can't paint it. Beautiful lines there Jean Murray October 24, 2017 at 3:51 AM Thank you Chigbo. My first love broke my heart at eighteen, forty years ago. It has yet to fully recover from the shock.

Brian Davey October 22, 2017 at 2:36 PM Oh the search for true love such a task it is, congrats Jean Murray October 22, 2017 at 3:56 PM God loves a Trier Brian. Thank you.

Teddy Kimathi October 22, 2017 at 7:48 AM Yes, everyone wants a love that will last forever. Congrats Jean, for your WIN in the contest! ;-) Jean Murray October 22, 2017 at 3:55 PM Thank you Teddy.

Eve Roper October 21, 2017 at 6:49 PM Jean, congratulations on your win well done.. :) Hugs Eve ~`* Jean Murray October 22, 2017 at 2:42 AM Good morning Eve. Thank you.

Vijay Pandit September 14, 2017 at 6:58 AM A melody of love and emotion--you did it well in such a short poem--so much said in so few words--well done, Jean! Jean Murray September 14, 2017 at 7:32 AM Hello again Vijay. My wee heart's story has been so well chronicled in these pages, I'm sure those super Soupers who have been with me since the start are hoping I DO fall in love again. A change of pace is long overdue.