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Lovelorn

rivers of tears will fall, memories left hanging on living room walls. © Harry J Horsman 1993

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/18/2012 12:03:00 PM
Sad poem and image... picture frame moment... good senryu...pd
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Date: 12/8/2012 7:09:00 PM
Harry, a deep thought...pd
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Date: 9/12/2012 9:05:00 PM
incredibly poignant one. I can't believe I ever missed this one back here.
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Date: 9/11/2010 6:46:00 PM
This is poetic classic
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Date: 7/11/2010 11:02:00 AM
great write, congrats on featured! Rhonda Hero
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Date: 7/11/2010 9:53:00 AM
Congratulations on this fine work being featured this week on homepage..Sara
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Date: 7/10/2010 10:48:00 AM
This speaks almost as a story within itself. Very nicely done. Thank you also for your nice words on my work.
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Date: 7/6/2010 3:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Harry. May you have many more features. Love,Carol
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Date: 7/5/2010 1:50:00 PM
Reads like a sad situation..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 7/5/2010 12:03:00 PM
Congrats Harry, on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup homepage this week, you are such a great talent! Keep up the great writes, and enjoy the honor. Love, Adeleke
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Date: 7/5/2010 8:45:00 AM
Again. I like this mucho. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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Date: 7/5/2010 7:52:00 AM
Many congrats on your wonderful featured piece this week, Rgds Janette
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Date: 7/4/2010 7:21:00 PM
What a creative use of imagery for an interesting perspective. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 7/2/2010 10:44:00 AM
A very expressive senryu poem, harry, and one that's perfect in the 5-7-5 syllable count. It leaves the reader with a vivid images of photographs hanging on the walls of a home. An excellent senryu. Thank you for your kind words on my recent poem. Carl.
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Date: 7/2/2010 8:07:00 AM
Very profound senryu, Harry. Those pictures on the walls have brought me more tears than I can say, but they also bring back memories of fun times. Life goes on, as they say. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/30/2010 2:25:00 PM
Great Senryu. Perfect image. Love, daver
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Date: 6/29/2010 9:35:00 AM
Wonderful Senryu! Sad!~Tirzah~
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Date: 6/29/2010 9:21:00 AM
Nice senryu. Enjoyed.
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