Loveliness

Longing to see you again and again
Only the  hope of you seeing those eyes  
Vivid memory's of being with you 
Everybody else knows what I desire , however 
Living my life  without seeing your smile
Isn't an option I can abide 
Nothing compares to being by your side 
Even the thought of you makes me weak at the knees
Seldom as love, brought me to my knees 
Seeing you so soon will be just like a dream.




comp entry  not sure i have done as instructed  1st go 12/02/16
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A   Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 2:40 PM
Thanks for the reply on the bottom
Gentry Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 7:48 AM
Congratulations on your win with this Acrostic rhyme! Well done.
Pennell  Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 8:48 AM
thank 1st go
A. Sharma Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 12:36 AM
Very well written.. big congrats on ur win stephen.
Pennell  Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 8:48 AM
thanks
A   Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 1:11 PM
Stephen, Congratulations on your wonderful "Loveliness-Acrostic" win. ~LINDA~
Pennell  Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 8:49 AM
you have been immortalised in poem ! thanks check me limerick out lol
Dietrich Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 6:32 PM
If it is his standard requirements, I think you have done it right. Stephen. Keep up the lovely work!
Pennell  Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 2:49 AM
thank you never knew there was so so many different types of poem lots learned from poetry soup
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