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Loveliness

Longing to see you again and again
Only the  hope of you seeing those eyes  
Vivid memory's of being with you 
Everybody else knows what I desire , however 
Living my life  without seeing your smile
Isn't an option I can abide 
Nothing compares to being by your side 
Even the thought of you makes me weak at the knees
Seldom as love, brought me to my knees 
Seeing you so soon will be just like a dream.




comp entry  not sure i have done as instructed  1st go 12/02/16

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Date: 3/8/2016 2:40:00 PM
Thanks for the reply on the bottom
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Date: 2/24/2016 7:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this Acrostic rhyme! Well done.
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 2/24/2016 8:48:00 AM
thank 1st go
Date: 2/23/2016 12:36:00 AM
Very well written.. big congrats on ur win stephen.
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 2/24/2016 8:48:00 AM
thanks
Date: 2/22/2016 1:11:00 PM
Stephen, Congratulations on your wonderful "Loveliness-Acrostic" win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/24/2016 8:49:00 AM
you have been immortalised in poem ! thanks check me limerick out lol
Date: 2/13/2016 6:32:00 PM
If it is his standard requirements, I think you have done it right. Stephen. Keep up the lovely work!
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 2/14/2016 2:49:00 AM
thank you never knew there was so so many different types of poem lots learned from poetry soup

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