Lovelight

You look at me and I get lost.
My purest thoughts are quickly tossed.
Your shining spirit makes you so handsome.
So captured by you I need a ransom.
Just when I thought my time was past.
You shined your light and I love at last.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Fleming Avatar
January 30, 2018 at 11:55 PM
What a beautiful visual you created!
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May 28, 2015 at 1:09 PM
One day someone needs to teach me the art of saying so much and yet saying so little. my comment is almost longer than your poem lol. A 7 A beautiful poem with a beautiful visual!! Ed
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May 17, 2015 at 10:34 PM
I enjoyed your poem of love.- Alexis
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May 13, 2015 at 12:39 PM
enjoyed this one ~luv, SKAT~
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