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You look at me and I get lost. My purest thoughts are quickly tossed. Your shining spirit makes you so handsome. So captured by you I need a ransom. Just when I thought my time was past. You shined your light and I love at last.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 1/30/2018 11:55:00 PM
What a beautiful visual you created!
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Date: 5/28/2015 1:09:00 PM
One day someone needs to teach me the art of saying so much and yet saying so little. my comment is almost longer than your poem lol. A 7 A beautiful poem with a beautiful visual!! Ed
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Date: 5/17/2015 10:34:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem of love.- Alexis
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Date: 5/13/2015 12:39:00 PM
enjoyed this one ~luv, SKAT~
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