Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Poet Rhyme

Loveless-Painless

Lights came on; dreams started to roam.
Floating along beside an unknown gnome.
Miserable heartaches shed.
Hurtful imaginings fled,
She woke up while her body stayed home.

© Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
June 11, 2010
Poetic form:  Rhyme

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John Loving Iii June 18, 2010 at 1:44 PM i picture the part of the story your in but what about the gnome what did he wake up next to? jhl

Carolyn Devonshire June 16, 2010 at 10:13 AM Such is the nature of nightmares, Dane Ann. I'm glad the "unknown gnome" was able to bring her peace. Great poem, dear friend! Love, Carolyn

Jayne Eggins June 13, 2010 at 11:12 AM awwww Dane I loved this one smile love Jayne

Gert W. Knop June 12, 2010 at 10:48 AM Hi Dane-Ann, I do hope that this was not real!!! Didn't hear a while from you and hope you are ok..Have a nice weekend...Gert