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Loveless

You hold nothing in my decrepit heart There is nothing there for you I see nothing that’s free I don’t know what you have inside your heart As it has blackened from soot And your hate has come out Our pale lives have darkened beyond all hope Our hearts have been torn apart Now completely loveless
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/30/2012 8:53:00 AM
I met a man once whose last name was Loveless..I always wondered from where his name's orgin came..Way to go on your win..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 1/26/2012 12:57:00 AM
pressed for time but read your superb piece, russell .. a generic message of delightful cheers for your greaat win!..:) huggs!
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Date: 1/25/2012 6:03:00 PM
happy to see you on the winners' list, my friend. Big congrats!!
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Date: 1/25/2012 8:55:00 AM
Dark but intriguing. Congratulations Russell
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Date: 1/25/2012 6:08:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in Brian's "UPTO Fourteen" contest Russell. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/24/2012 3:36:00 PM
This is very well portrayed and oh so sad- that no light can shine- blessings and heartfelt hope for you Russell, Blessings, brenda
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Date: 1/24/2012 12:09:00 AM
A passionate poem about the lack of passion!! You captured lovelessness!!
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Date: 1/23/2012 8:35:00 PM
move on an catch another train, another cause 4 hope again, says johnson from his little brain, you cant be flogged 4 trying:) me too i"m not denying, i must again:(
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Date: 1/23/2012 8:12:00 PM
ooh sounds tragic and hopeless, Russell, a dark poem...hope it's not true
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