Loveless

Miss you!!!! Carol, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA

Sad, but definitely true. Everyone at some point in life feels like this and it's not an easy thing to go through. I love how you end it with the word lonely because lonely is the last feeling one feels after a broken heart. <3

Closed doors hide secrets Carol but not for those inside . Thank you for your words they moved me best wishes Declan xx

That pretty well summs it up alright. Well done. Good description. Good emotion. God Bless, JB

Hey.! a discriptive write here Carol..! but you'd better not feel like this the whole time cos i need happy poetry:) all the better days i wish you Joe

yes, loveless and lonely do go hand in hand, Carol. Good cinquain!

Without love living life seems to be like that what your writing depicts. Wonderfully done well. bl

Carol, it's often heard to admit, but there are many lonely people who need love to heal their hearts. Beautiful write, dear! Love, carolyn

Once somthing is "broken" Carol, i've heard it is impossible to break it again so if it then continues to work though broken..! what they gonna do then..! and i wish you many good poems, yours Joe

* “Makes Myself Wish to Reach Out & Hold Your Precious Beautiful Heart Unto My Own * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Carol * Yet to Be Honest * I Have Long Felt That Desire * Very Moving, &, Very Beautiful * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *

Very sad....but amazing poetry from you Carol!Thanks for ever inspiring congrats messages at my pages.

awww...so sad