Loveless

Demons from her past made her mind their battleground she defeated love

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Jean Bush

Date: 12/24/2019 11:29:00 PM

Sad & lovely. You have to let go to get the best.

Running Wolves
Date: 12/25/2019 3:37:00 AM

True, but some never learn. Thank you bunches

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/12/2019 8:12:00 AM

Potent penning. Excellent.

Running Wolves
Date: 12/12/2019 8:24:00 AM

Thank you very much

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/5/2019 10:10:00 PM

Your way with words is lovely Robert.

Running Wolves
Date: 12/6/2019 7:46:00 AM

You are simply to kind

Ann Foster

Date: 12/4/2019 2:05:00 PM

Defeated okay... but then ... release the demons... tell them to go elsewhere... introduce hope... :) lovely write. You are great at this. A sad.. but beautiful read... Ann

Running Wolves
Date: 12/4/2019 2:20:00 PM

You are to kind dear Lady, thank you

Becca Teagan

Date: 2/17/2019 9:38:00 AM

hi Robert. Good to see you still writing.

Running Wolves
Date: 12/6/2019 7:45:00 AM

Thank you

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/3/2019 4:34:00 PM

So sad, Robert.

Running Wolves
Date: 12/5/2019 11:33:00 AM

Its seems to be the way of the world. Some just can't let go of the past for whatever reason, and some just like the attention of playing victim. Either way they end up the real loser because life won't empathize or care in reality. Thanks