Loved You From the Very Start

She is my queen who lives in my heart
She is my spark that leaves us never far apart
She is my queen who is cunning and smart
She hits my love out of the ballpark
like an angel with wings'
She makes my heart sing

Like a cool fire, she burns within me
So that I might see the happy spirit
She has created within thee
So that I might be set free
To capture all the love as far as I can see

You ignite all these wonderful feelings in me
As she lights up my nights
Like a meteorite on her maiden flight 
With a bluish red glow
Where she takes me I will grow

My queen of all my tomorrows
I will love you forever
Because you stole the show
And captured my heart
I loved you right from the start
My queen who now lives in my heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 4/28/2018 6:15:00 PM
Hello Jack Cooper, I consider this poem a love poem. Evn though it is a rhyme. have a nice evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/29/2018 5:30:00 PM
It does not matter this is how I have seen your poem. Because to me it red as a love poem. Even though you wrote it as a rhyme. Sometimes i see things differently. I have enjoyed this poem.
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Jack Cooper
Date: 4/29/2018 12:51:00 AM
If they had that title then I sure would have used it, Darlene, I appreciate where you are going with your thoughts thanks for sharing.
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